I'm telling you about this, as its an example of how you should leave a piece of work to marinade for anything from a few weeks to several years, and then go back to view it afresh. The story I entered for the above competition was originally 2,700 words in length, written in the third-person past tense, with an ending that didn't seem quite right and yet had no obvious alternative.
Fifteen years on - yes, that long - it "called" to me from a drawer. Shaking the dust off it, I carried out a savage revision on it, knocking it down to 1,600 words, rewriting it in the first-person present tense, and giving it a completely new ending that I really liked.
And the moral of this tale? ...That following years of hard work and numerous knock-backs, success starts happening when...
- You take on board constructive criticism from people whose expertise you respect.
- You resist the temptation to enter the first draft of a piece of work into a competition, also applying this same rule to submission of work to publishers and agents.
- And you don't let yourself be misled by stories in the press about writers who are overnight successes, as it's unlikely you're ever being told the full story.